awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww you have no idea how i adore this story. and my comment on the previous chapter was more like a conclusion already but i still had something to write here. even if i repeat, i don't care. i love this story, deal with it!
i have two theories with the ending of this story, you know. 1. it's ryo's thoughts in the beginning and ryo's letter at the end. 2. the beginning is ryo's letter in the ends, and the end is of course the beginning of ryo's letter in the beginning.
oh how i hope you got it. but it bsically means on thing. instead of jin, it was ryo who started and ended this chapter, the final chapter. I THINK that despite the lack of physical presence of ryo in this story was an unimagineable way of feeling his character and the things that he has been through. you really were effective in writing the emotions not just of jin but also ryo's! it's perfect.
this chapter is the epilogue, right? basically the summary of the things that has happened after jin finally found ryo. it didn't get into so much detail but the ideas of how things went through were enough. their set up is normal. i'm glaad about that because their relationship isn't ordinary after all. i'm just pretty sure that apart from the bickering they do are late night talks and words of assurance for ryo's healing. and with ryo's healing is jin's relief. that would make their relationship more than perect. who wants a perfect relationship, anyway? that would be boring!
haha! i don't know what to say anymore. i just would like to say that what you did with the altering of the conventional presentation of each chapter was cute! although i predicted that ryo would nswer jin's lettter, it still had an impact to me. it was cute and really sweet. i just couldn't see their relationship going to a lost battle anymore.
apparently, they've grown in those days/weeks of being apart. They'd be better together.
Thanks so much, dear for wiriting this! i really loved this story! i'm so sad that it ended but I still ahve Jade which I adore so much, too! I hope you can write more! Thank you soooooooooooooo much!
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i have two theories with the ending of this story, you know.
1. it's ryo's thoughts in the beginning and ryo's letter at the end.
2. the beginning is ryo's letter in the ends, and the end is of course the beginning of ryo's letter in the beginning.
oh how i hope you got it. but it bsically means on thing. instead of jin, it was ryo who started and ended this chapter, the final chapter. I THINK that despite the lack of physical presence of ryo in this story was an unimagineable way of feeling his character and the things that he has been through. you really were effective in writing the emotions not just of jin but also ryo's! it's perfect.
this chapter is the epilogue, right? basically the summary of the things that has happened after jin finally found ryo. it didn't get into so much detail but the ideas of how things went through were enough. their set up is normal. i'm glaad about that because their relationship isn't ordinary after all. i'm just pretty sure that apart from the bickering they do are late night talks and words of assurance for ryo's healing. and with ryo's healing is jin's relief. that would make their relationship more than perect. who wants a perfect relationship, anyway? that would be boring!
haha! i don't know what to say anymore. i just would like to say that what you did with the altering of the conventional presentation of each chapter was cute! although i predicted that ryo would nswer jin's lettter, it still had an impact to me. it was cute and really sweet. i just couldn't see their relationship going to a lost battle anymore.
apparently, they've grown in those days/weeks of being apart. They'd be better together.
Thanks so much, dear for wiriting this! i really loved this story! i'm so sad that it ended but I still ahve Jade which I adore so much, too! I hope you can write more! Thank you soooooooooooooo much!