honey, really. every chapter of this fic gives an impact to me everytime! i love it so much!
alright, let's get down to business. so ryo loves surfing and painting but jin doesn't want to join him and apparently even mocks his drawing. that's pretty cool and exciting actually. opposites attract after all, right? But then, we have to take note that we have a very fragile and super easily get hurt ryo here (although jin didn't notice it or at least didn't take it seriously) so it made a lot of sense. sigh. the mood is always melancholic and i feel like crying because of ryo. idk, i feel for him so much. i bet he had been keeping everything for so long up to the point that he couldn't breathe anymore. i wonder how's he right now, really. is he okay? gets me thinking, are we totally going to be totally clueless about ryo's condition until jin finally finds him? that'll be a total thrill! my gosh. oh right, until how many chapters will this be? you know, even though this torture me everytime i read it (3rd time now), i would gladly have this in many chapter! so cleaver, eh!
anyway, pi was definitely hurt that jin wwent to tegoshi first before him. that's a bit of a comic part, here, though. a bit calm unlike the flashback. i thought actually that pi was useless here but saying things about ryo's doubts helped jin, didn't it? having doubt is such a powerful element, you know. and i may not understand why ryo have so much of it at the moment, but i know i will, later.
i would love to know more about that Ryo's thing with his brothers. might help out deepen the story. but i'm also glad that Jin found another clue, that is to talk to hina and yoko. they will surely say a lot about ryo. i know in RL yoko and ryo get along really well. are hina and ryo the same? don't know much about hina except that he loves smacking people a lot, eh. sorry about that.
and finally, gosh. the last part made me even sadder :( but it's beautiful, you know. it's amazing. i could feel jin's longing for ryo. he loves him so much, oesn't he? he cares for him so badly but is now cluesless abput where he is and what he is doing. i hope he finds him soon. or not soon. i don't know already! this is just amazing, really! what an amazing piece of art! you're nailing it again! thank you so much, dear! :)
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alright, let's get down to business. so ryo loves surfing and painting but jin doesn't want to join him and apparently even mocks his drawing. that's pretty cool and exciting actually. opposites attract after all, right? But then, we have to take note that we have a very fragile and super easily get hurt ryo here (although jin didn't notice it or at least didn't take it seriously) so it made a lot of sense. sigh. the mood is always melancholic and i feel like crying because of ryo. idk, i feel for him so much. i bet he had been keeping everything for so long up to the point that he couldn't breathe anymore. i wonder how's he right now, really. is he okay? gets me thinking, are we totally going to be totally clueless about ryo's condition until jin finally finds him? that'll be a total thrill! my gosh. oh right, until how many chapters will this be? you know, even though this torture me everytime i read it (3rd time now), i would gladly have this in many chapter! so cleaver, eh!
anyway, pi was definitely hurt that jin wwent to tegoshi first before him. that's a bit of a comic part, here, though. a bit calm unlike the flashback. i thought actually that pi was useless here but saying things about ryo's doubts helped jin, didn't it? having doubt is such a powerful element, you know. and i may not understand why ryo have so much of it at the moment, but i know i will, later.
i would love to know more about that Ryo's thing with his brothers. might help out deepen the story. but i'm also glad that Jin found another clue, that is to talk to hina and yoko. they will surely say a lot about ryo. i know in RL yoko and ryo get along really well. are hina and ryo the same? don't know much about hina except that he loves smacking people a lot, eh. sorry about that.
and finally, gosh. the last part made me even sadder :( but it's beautiful, you know. it's amazing. i could feel jin's longing for ryo. he loves him so much, oesn't he? he cares for him so badly but is now cluesless abput where he is and what he is doing. i hope he finds him soon. or not soon. i don't know already! this is just amazing, really! what an amazing piece of art! you're nailing it again! thank you so much, dear! :)