http://sweetspicyhot.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sweetspicyhot.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lilly0 2011-12-24 07:32 am (UTC)

Thanks for updating, I know this was a hard one. It is a strange feeling to write a scene where a beloved character suffers greatly even if you know the end.

i love the first scene where Ryo is doing his best to save himself and Takki from the hunters. He is sharper somehow, more aggressive and it suited the moment.

Yamapi is more self-confident now and, but I wonder if he is too confident in his ability to handle the necklace.

Oh I want Sho to help Jun, even if they cannot be together in the end. And then it made me think that maybe Jun can help Ryo and Jin. Somewhere there is hope. I will wait to find out where it exists.

Poor Ryo, he is just enduring this torture, waiting for it to end, Waiting for his brother to come back. Of course we don't know how hard Jin tried to fight his angry feelings. I think it will take so much longer for him to forgive himself for what he's done. I thought about this for a long time after I read it. It stayed with me this chapter. Thanks so much for this. Looking very much forward to the next.

Hugs, hearts,and snowy the sock snowman (will send a picture) :D :D :D<3<3<3


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