http://estemarie.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] estemarie.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lilly0 2011-11-30 04:41 pm (UTC)

This story is built up like a little crime story, with Jin looking for reasons, answers...and Ryo. Every chapter starts and ends with a letter Jin is writing down into a notebook - like a diary.


OMG. You got me. You just made me regret ceasing from reading your works. God. This is amazing. The style is different and it makes me want more. I love dark pasts, crime stuff and all the mystery. I love the title! Monologue! Everything is perfect! I know I'm gonna love this one so much!

Anyway, I like it that the narration focuses on someone's feelings, and that is Jin's. Somehow, the emotion gets directed as if the reader is Jin. I think reading it from his point of view as he find clues about Ryo's past and struggle will really be effective. I am curious right now! Can't wait for the next update! Thanks for this! I really adore the title!


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