http://sweetspicyhot.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sweetspicyhot.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lilly0 2012-05-29 03:24 am (UTC)

Hello! Thanks for this. You will see that I wrote the comments out of order--that is because I thought I already commented on this one. :D But i am so glad that Jin finally explains things to Yuu and Ryo--he should have long ago. Now at least Ryo will listen to him and they can begin to repair their relationship.

Kame and Jin--ah we have been waiting for this--the smut (and I cannot even call it that) the description of their love making was beautiful. I liked how it was from Kazuya's perspective--it really showed that character's vulnerable side. I especially loved this part "Almost, because perfect would have been boring… and with Jin it was special." And I loved when he was thinking that the case brought him Jin. There is never just good or bad in life-- it is all mixed in and that is one of the things I love about your fics.<3

Kazuya gets up because he has an epiphany about the letter. And this for sure changes everything. I love all the plot developments in the story. You keep the reader intrigued you know. I am intrigued.:D
Thank you again.

Hugs, hearts, and first times that are special.:D:D:D<3<3<3

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