hello there hun! i kinda am passed the tanning i gave myself but just now, i'll extend a bit. but tomorrow, i'll set up the surf control so it'll be impossible for me to check this out anymore.

first off, thanks so much for the spot! you know how much i've been waiting for this fic! :D

so if i may proceed.... i knew it! i knew there's gonna be something with the letter. hah! i'm so happy. and thoughts about kame having connection and relationship with the woman are just getting confirmed. so his father knows her, too. she could be a her child but wasn't she about to get married when she disappeared? i could take that away but then again there's still a possibility. there has to be a strong reason for kame to take the initiative to find the woman. and his father, i wonder who he is cause he is definitely something. and why does he care if kame wants to find the woman, right? so it must have been affecting his life for so long already. and the men going to kame's place... are they his father's men or someone else's? hmm. i know i'm not getting any answers from writing here but i write nevertheless. to let you know how i think as i read this story :)

you know, i'm really really glad that jin shared this problem they have. but i was thinking of the other secret he has been hiding. i'm not sure but it may be bigger that's why he still hides it. at least now, though. yuu and ryo both know about these threats. i'm just a bit worried that ryo doesn't seem to be scared or something. well ryo really looks brave but i'm not sure if he can stay like that when something happens, you know. but about that part, i'm just glad that jin finally realized that he had to talk to his brother.

oh the talk. i just love it so much. i like the hard to get ryo. those go away parts. missing home and missing his cool and fun brother. that's both cute and sad. i really felt how ryo thought here. it seemed like he lost jin for quite a while. but i think he was too overwhelmed to find out that jin was not really mad or picking at him or something because he was just trying to protect his brother. but then again, ryo's carelessness is a huge no-no. he didn't seem to mind the threat, right? i think he'll think about this when something happens and it'll totally freak him out instead. but then again, their relationship is just too cute that i can't. jin really wants to look after his brother and i guess ryo feels the same. i love when he called jin oniichan cause he doesn't really use honorifics all the time, right? :) so as i was saying, ryo might have just missed the fact that he should be scared or cautious from now on since i really find his character so observant that he totally missed that. well his insights about jin obviously having an eye for kame, as well as yuu towards ueda were enough to prove that, right? i'm totally thinking but i know these litle question will be answered in the later chapters :)

kame and jin's relationship are really going deeper now and they are getting more and more attached- especially that they are closely working on this case. but i can't help but think about the secrets everytime they talk. or am i just really paranoid and overthinking? there, the woman. i think it's linking these two yet she has the power to get in between them. so she's alive... i really believe kame knows her- it could be the secret he couldn't tel jin, though but why? urgh! just so many questions right now :(

anyways, thanks dear for posting this chapter! i admit that i am more excited now about the next one because this chapter basically didn't answer my questions. well, as if the next one's going to... :( sobs. i want to know the answers yet i don't want this story to finish yet. sad. i don't know anymore. i'm kinda disoriented. sorry about that. i just want to say thank youuuuuuuuu because i totally loved it!