I really loved your story. I pitied Sho though. He kinda seemed lost. :'( You have an amazing way to write and I always love to read your fics. You can express yourself so very well. *bows* Theres just one thing I didnt quite get and that would be with the 2 ryos. So, Ryo was Yokos brother.he died in an accident and waited for his brother. When Yoko saved the little Ryo in that ship accident the two Ryos met? And the Ryo he saved came to that desert place with Takki to Yoko and Sho? But if he got carried away by Takki why didnt Yoko get carried away by Sho? Omg, after reading this again I think you will probably not understand me very well.^^ Thank you anyways for your lovely fanfic!! *huggles* :*
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You have an amazing way to write and I always love to read your fics. You can express yourself so very well. *bows*
Theres just one thing I didnt quite get and that would be with the 2 ryos. So, Ryo was Yokos brother.he died in an accident and waited for his brother. When Yoko saved the little Ryo in that ship accident the two Ryos met? And the Ryo he saved came to that desert place with Takki to Yoko and Sho? But if he got carried away by Takki why didnt Yoko get carried away by Sho?
Omg, after reading this again I think you will probably not understand me very well.^^
Thank you anyways for your lovely fanfic!!
*huggles*
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