http://estemarie.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] estemarie.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lilly0 2012-01-25 02:13 pm (UTC)

you sure know how to write effectively and mind boggle your readers. okay, i have guesses and stuff and i somehow understand this story already and the characters as well. BUT, you know, the way you write this fic gives me the feeling that i might be totally wrong. it's a bit unpredictable!

i think it's given already that yoko and ryo knows each other in real life, right? maybe they're brothers or something. i stil don't get why ryo had to appear on yoko's place though. was that suppsosed to be a goodbye? hmm, idk eactually. maybe and MAYBE NOT.

i'm glad that yoko finally understood and fought it. even though i haven't completely understood the existence of this world, i'm really happy that yoko was on his way out of it. he fought! yay just like how ryo did.

but then, sho said that if he didn't fight it, sho might have taken him, right? so does that mean than ryo didn't fight it that's why takki took him? but, it's still not that fixed cause takki didn't take ryo from his own supposed blace but yoko's right?

there, that's what i'm talking about! so many posssibilities and you really got me thinking! but anywho, we're down to the last chapter and even though i'm sure i'll be missing this fic a lot, i know that it's gonna be awesome!

thanks for this wonderful chapter, dear! i wonder when you are posting the last chapter, though? thanks!

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