http://sweetspicyhot.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sweetspicyhot.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lilly0 2012-01-22 07:14 am (UTC)

Thanks for this update.

I like that we get a bit of attitude from Ryo in the beginning when Yoko calls him small. But after that Ryo is desperate ne. He wants so badly to communicate to Ryo, but he doesn't what he doesn't understand fully himself. He is just acting on instinct. Ryo is not the same as Takki and Sho but he still can't give Yoko the answers he wants. And the most cryptic line of all for me is when Ryo says “You are the most important!” It is as if Yoko has all the power but is missing the key knowledge that will enable him to use it to free himself, even though he is trying very hard.

And Ryo keeps saying he is sorry. I feel that is important too. Everyone is either afraid of breaking some code or they only know as much as they are letting on. I love Yoko's description of a perfect love. You did a great job there.

Hugs, hearts, and the first real snow--it happened today! :D :D :D <3<3<3

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