Hello! Tonight I will comment on all the White Sand chapters, breaking my "in order" plan.
I love Takki here, because his focus is on Ryo and something has gone terribly wrong, and now he has to deal with Yoko interfering. This part was really intriguing to me. The two things I love the most about this fic are the mood and the setting. The setting really is almost as powerful as any of the characters--the place they are in is beautiful but it comes at a price ne... at the same time all of Yoko's unanswered questions up the tension. This fic is fascinating but unsettling, you keep us all on edge. I love it!
Takki gives Yoko, and us, a few more hints. The most desperate clue seemed to be that Ryo was getting weak in Yoko's arms. Would the same thing happen to Yoko if he were left with only Takki? I love how Sho does his best to help the situation, but since this anomaly has occurred, with Takki and Ryo not being where they should, it seems as if he is too is at a loss, waiting for some part of this situation to be resolved.
But my favorite part of this chapter is when Takki takes Ryo away and just strokes his hair. That part was so tender
Thank you for this chapter. On to the next, thank you for everything you write and also for the person you are,
Hugs, hearts, and cream puffs and other assorted pastries. :D :D :D <3<3<3
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I love Takki here, because his focus is on Ryo and something has gone terribly wrong, and now he has to deal with Yoko interfering. This part was really intriguing to me. The two things I love the most about this fic are the mood and the setting. The setting really is almost as powerful as any of the characters--the place they are in is beautiful but it comes at a price ne... at the same time all of Yoko's unanswered questions up the tension. This fic is fascinating but unsettling, you keep us all on edge. I love it!
Takki gives Yoko, and us, a few more hints. The most desperate clue seemed to be that Ryo was getting weak in Yoko's arms. Would the same thing happen to Yoko if he were left with only Takki?
I love how Sho does his best to help the situation, but since this anomaly has occurred, with Takki and Ryo not being where they should, it seems as if he is too is at a loss, waiting for some part of this situation to be resolved.
But my favorite part of this chapter is when Takki takes Ryo away and just strokes his hair. That part was so tender
Thank you for this chapter. On to the next, thank you for everything you write and also for the person you are,
Hugs, hearts, and cream puffs and other assorted pastries. :D :D :D <3<3<3