you know, this fic is really getting into my nerves. why? because i can't decipher the reason why the hell this girl disappeared. so i thought it was a scary myth stuff that would creep me out. but then you surprised me. yakuza? politics? i don't know how these stuff go in japan but tha way you wrote it, it really seemed to serious and big. now i'm more troubled. this girl is really something.
jin is awesome. i love how he was able to manipulate those innocent kids and extract really important information from them. kame admired him for that, right? and i'm happy that they are somehow building a good relationship. it's nice how they develop as they work for the case. and jin being kind to invite kame around was sweet, too!
so uchi was being bullied. sad. glad that ryo helped out, though. i just thought exactly the same. i knew he couldn't help out uchi alone so i was glad to read yuu and ueda's names. would it be ryouchi here? i seriously thought it's gonna be ryopi. but who cares, it's the story that matters to me. i know you're going to nail it big time. :D
i don't know. i had to read the first chapters again because i felt there was something off. so jin was lsing something in the prologue. i assume that would be ryo. so their relationship was really important here. cause i was wuite bothered by the fact that jin is so overly protective of his brother. was that natural or something else is behind that? also when ueda talked about it, it felt like there's something more. i mean off to the ueda-kame thing that you wanted to insinuate. i wonder i wonder. jin's really worried, eh. so yeah. you know i can't miss a thing when it's a bout ryo, right?
but aside from that. i really admire jin for being such a caring and cool brother. ryo surely looks up to him and that always make me smile. their scenes are always full of bickering and stuff but i know they're just sweet and thoughtful like that. i just hope that nothing really bad happens to the two of them you know. and to the others as well.
poort kame. so he has a family. and sir. why the hell would he have to call his father, sir? seriously. hmmp. so yeah. thsi whole thing got me thinking that kame might be related to the girl who owns the necklace. and ueda intrigues me a bit, you know because of that one line. so we'll see how far this will go.
i'm excited! thanks so much for this update! i really love this story! :D
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jin is awesome. i love how he was able to manipulate those innocent kids and extract really important information from them. kame admired him for that, right? and i'm happy that they are somehow building a good relationship. it's nice how they develop as they work for the case. and jin being kind to invite kame around was sweet, too!
so uchi was being bullied. sad. glad that ryo helped out, though. i just thought exactly the same. i knew he couldn't help out uchi alone so i was glad to read yuu and ueda's names. would it be ryouchi here? i seriously thought it's gonna be ryopi. but who cares, it's the story that matters to me. i know you're going to nail it big time. :D
i don't know. i had to read the first chapters again because i felt there was something off. so jin was lsing something in the prologue. i assume that would be ryo. so their relationship was really important here. cause i was wuite bothered by the fact that jin is so overly protective of his brother. was that natural or something else is behind that? also when ueda talked about it, it felt like there's something more. i mean off to the ueda-kame thing that you wanted to insinuate. i wonder i wonder. jin's really worried, eh. so yeah. you know i can't miss a thing when it's a bout ryo, right?
but aside from that. i really admire jin for being such a caring and cool brother. ryo surely looks up to him and that always make me smile. their scenes are always full of bickering and stuff but i know they're just sweet and thoughtful like that. i just hope that nothing really bad happens to the two of them you know. and to the others as well.
poort kame. so he has a family. and sir. why the hell would he have to call his father, sir? seriously. hmmp. so yeah. thsi whole thing got me thinking that kame might be related to the girl who owns the necklace. and ueda intrigues me a bit, you know because of that one line. so we'll see how far this will go.
i'm excited! thanks so much for this update! i really love this story! :D