Hello here I am.:D Thanks so much for the update. This fic is getting so intriguing.
But what I love the most is the interaction between Jin and Kame. Kame is so closed off, but he really needs help with the person following him. And Jin I can just see him flirting and teasing everyone. Even though he is a photographer he makes a great detective. He really knows how to get the information, ne.
I can't wait until they trust each other a bit more, and become even closer. i love the small touches you add like the cheesecake and little boats. You are right no one asks the children, and often they have alot to tell.
When they got to the part, even though there was nothing there except the children playing. It gave me the chills a little because I remembered the woman dragging her suitcase. You did that. Great job. I love it.
Oh I almost forgot, Poor Uchi, I hope Ryo will find a way to reach him.
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But what I love the most is the interaction between Jin and Kame. Kame is so closed off, but he really needs help with the person following him. And Jin I can just see him flirting and teasing everyone. Even though he is a photographer he makes a great detective. He really knows how to get the information, ne.
I can't wait until they trust each other a bit more, and become even closer. i love the small touches you add like the cheesecake and little boats. You are right no one asks the children, and often they have alot to tell.
When they got to the part, even though there was nothing there except the children playing. It gave me the chills a little because I remembered the woman dragging her suitcase. You did that. Great job. I love it.
Oh I almost forgot, Poor Uchi, I hope Ryo will find a way to reach him.
Hugs, hearts, and great friends.:D:D:D
PS. Did you see my new layout? What do you think?