YOU READ IT!? I'm so happy and surprised <3 Thanks so much, my dear friend! *HUGS*
I don't even know where to start now <3 First: Thank you for your amazing feedback! I was so happy when I got your comment that I read it several times. <3 *huggles*
You are right: The genre of this story was definitely family and friendship. Romance was there too - but it was actually more of a side-effect, not the main point. The main point were the characters, struggling with each other to get over their past. The centre of this story were Takki and Ryo and their relationship to each other.
Takki really fought for Ryo - even when he was pushing it over the top sometimes. Well, a teenager can easily be annoyed, right? ;-) But Takki didn't give up, even when he made mistakes sometimes.
You know, when I started this story, I wanted to make something entirely different out of it - something much lighter ^^ That's why the Aiba-Ohno scenes at the beginning were so random. I had no idea where this Fiction was going to until I wrote a few chapters. Then it suddenly became something totally different ^^
I'm really happy that you also liked the romance elements here. I know you don't like mxm much and are just getting used to it. But you are right, the main part was about friendship - like Ryo slowly opening up to the persons around him and finding friends, Aiba trying to get over his past relationship, Takki finding support by Sakamoto. I'm just soooooooooooo happy you liked it that way, really! *MAJORHUG*
In the end I didn't feel the need to write that everything was super-duper well again, but it was more important to show that Ryo started to fight together with Takki and not against him anymore. That he tried to get over his past, that he tried to open up more and trust and forgive those people around him.
XDDDD This story was my first huge Multi-chapter. Hence I'm really really thankful that you read it!! And I'm so happy that you liked it!!
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Thanks so much, my dear friend! *HUGS*
I don't even know where to start now <3
First: Thank you for your amazing feedback! I was so happy when I got your comment that I read it several times. <3 *huggles*
You are right: The genre of this story was definitely family and friendship. Romance was there too - but it was actually more of a side-effect, not the main point.
The main point were the characters, struggling with each other to get over their past. The centre of this story were Takki and Ryo and their relationship to each other.
Takki really fought for Ryo - even when he was pushing it over the top sometimes. Well, a teenager can easily be annoyed, right? ;-) But Takki didn't give up, even when he made mistakes sometimes.
You know, when I started this story, I wanted to make something entirely different out of it - something much lighter ^^ That's why the Aiba-Ohno scenes at the beginning were so random. I had no idea where this Fiction was going to until I wrote a few chapters. Then it suddenly became something totally different ^^
I'm really happy that you also liked the romance elements here. I know you don't like mxm much and are just getting used to it.
But you are right, the main part was about friendship - like Ryo slowly opening up to the persons around him and finding friends, Aiba trying to get over his past relationship, Takki finding support by Sakamoto.
I'm just soooooooooooo happy you liked it that way, really! *MAJORHUG*
In the end I didn't feel the need to write that everything was super-duper well again, but it was more important to show that Ryo started to fight together with Takki and not against him anymore. That he tried to get over his past, that he tried to open up more and trust and forgive those people around him.
XDDDD This story was my first huge Multi-chapter. Hence I'm really really thankful that you read it!! And I'm so happy that you liked it!!
Thanks so much for your support!! *HUGSTIGHT*