"Jin had sneaked " I kind of really love you for this! I always get so excited when I see people use sneaked instead of snuck, since most people use snuck when casually speaking they don't always consider that it's technically wrong when writing (I've probably done that myself even). I know, that's a weird thing to get excited about, but I'm kind of a weird person.

Yay for more character development and plot advances! I'm really curious about what exactly is going on with Maru; I'm half convinced it might be a personal/mental problem, but then again, I'm not....That made no sense, did it? Next chapter is when they go to Yamapi's house, right? That should be very interesting.