Normally I would just go on about the fic, and I know it is still just one of three. But, I have three things to say this time.
1)This is one of the best fics, and best beginnings, that I have ever had the privilege to read.
2) For Ryo in your fic, another quote:"and now I am glad, in spite of the wasted days, no, because of them, since crawling through an underground tunnel is black on account of the light and color above ground. since the hollow pain which ached in my ribcage signified a missing element, which by it's nature, being missing could be found." from Waking by Eva Figes
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1)This is one of the best fics, and best beginnings, that I have ever had the privilege to read.
2) For Ryo in your fic, another quote:"and now I am glad, in spite of the wasted days, no, because of them, since crawling through an underground tunnel is black on account of the light and color above ground. since the hollow pain which ached in my ribcage signified a missing element, which by it's nature, being missing could be found." from Waking by Eva Figes
3)To Jin in your fic: Help him.