http://sweetspicyhot.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sweetspicyhot.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lilly0 2011-07-12 04:23 am (UTC)

Back for more commenting. Again i love this fic. It is like a Ryo/Kame love map, almost like a song, with each relationship having it's own distinct melody (too cheesy?) I love how there are touching and funny moments. Some of my favorite funny moments here are Kame trying to wake up Pi, Ueda getting dragged to surfing lessons, and Kame following Ryo and Asami.

The manual is pure genius. I love #9 "Don't give up! Win him." Kame should show the manual to Ryo sometime, maybe on an important anniversary.

But my favorite moment was when Kame was playing the guitar. Because he was trying so hard and that was the first real risk Ryo took.

I feel like this is one I will read again and again, so well done. Thank you. I know what I said before but how about hugs to the sun and back again. :D

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